Final Draft Reflection

1. I think it turned out pretty good.
2. I worked on trying to add some specific quotes that would help answer my thesis and just help out my essay in general.
3. The thing that was difficult for me as I didn't really know what else to talk about because I can only talk about so much of a song before it starts to get repetitive; the easy part of this was just answering my thesis because the song that I picked was very good to answer with it.
4. I think I did a good job with answering my thesis but I think I had a hard time getting to 500 words because it got to a point and I did not know what to write.
5. I think if I had more time I would go more in-depth then I did about the quotes that I choose.
6.  Is should get all points for having above 500 words I also had a thesis with all different body paragraphs. I think I might get points off for my title because I just did not know what to write.

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