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I movie link

https://youtu.be/axlXFWZhLeA

out of class writing

1. What was your vision as a director/creator for this project? I visioned kinda the same thing but with some different twist to it  2. What elements of the original story did you maintain in your project?  I used the same character names and how in the beginning he was leaving going to work but that is about it. 3. What did you change about the original story in your project? I added a lot of different things to my story like him driving to work and getting stuck in traffic and then having to take a detour and he then gets hit by a big 18wheeler truck and he is put into to a coma.  4. What is the twist or climax of your adaptation? the twist of this story is when Mrs mallard visit Mr mallard in the hospital she just looks at him in a coma and stabs him to death then turns looks in the mirror and stabs herself. 5. What is the strongest part of your project so far? my strongest part of my project so far is thinking of a story and making one. 6. What is the weakest part o...

Modernized adaptation

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Genre: Drama characters:  Mrs. Mallard, her husband, her sister Josephine, Husband friends Richard Setting: It takes place in the mallard's residence in the 2000s  Plot: After Mr mallard finally got around all of the traffic and started to merge onto the highway he got into a terrible car accident and does not know if he will survive. Pivotal Moments: 1. the first moment was when Mr mallard left for work. 2. He had to go a different way to work today because there was a bad motorcycle accident that happened on the road he usually takes to work so he has to take a long detour to get there. 3. When he finally got passed all of the traffic from the accident and was driving past on a different road he then had to merge on the highway and got hit by a big 18 wheeler truck. 4. now they have to tell the news to Mrs mallard that her husband has been in a terrible accident and has been put in a coma. when she visited him in the hospital she just looks at him with a blank stare ...

how to modernize

I think we could turn this into a good play we could get it to be a little more dramatic and we could bring a dog into the mix because why not ANd instead of a happy ending everyone in the story somehow dies and the dog is the only one who is alive and he is now the ruler of the world